in my melancholy baggage
there’s a dead dog a dead dad
a dead friend or two
a first love gone to fat
too many feuds a la cab sav
silver dance shoes
with a broken buckle
a black velvet dress for a boy
who danced a sore throat away
mum with a tongue sharp as a paper cut
a cream plastic lamb on a xmas tree
one stillborn burning at my uncle’s farm
the dead tabby on the way home from school
ringed with stones and cringing petals
and the walking fish outside the Bio Lab
speared by Cousins with his compass
stopped in its placid tracks
minding its own business
Finalist in Goodreads poem of the month January 2013
First appeared in Windmills, 2011
I absolutely love the line about …too many feuds a la cab sav
brilliant music, mysterious, succinct.
the cream plastic lamb is a really good line too, it makes me think of creamed lamb which is horrid and affecting.
I can see why this was a finalist. You have a real knack for bringing together a lot of disparate notions.
Love the title and pic!